2017-11-23 Thursday

专升本写作讲义

作者:文献建设部    时间:2017-11-09

现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班:
1. 对这种做有人表示支持.
2. 有人并不赞成.
3. 我认为.
开头:  
Nowadays, there has been an increasing number of parents who prefer to send their kids to attend various kinds of classes, which has aroused bitter controversy among the public.


There is a heated controversy over whether parents should send their kids to attend various kinds of classes.
支持:
Some people maintain that these extra curriculums are of great necessity and benefits to students. 


Some individuals maintain that attending classes is aimed to broaden their kids’ horizons and enrich their knowledge in that the kids can get acquainted with peers from different family background, which is beneficial for their future life and career. 


They can learn how to cooperate with each other and how to develop a harmonious relationship with his or her classmates, which is absolutely essential when they grow up. 


Some people take it for granted and think through this method, their kids can make use of leisure time to learn more skills and be prepared for the future fierce competition in the adult world. 
反对:
On the contrary, others argue that these courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. They worry about that students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school.
我的观点:
As far as I am concerned, I stand by the latter side, because its disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Above all, for children, play is their nature. It will do great harm to both their physical and mental health if they are deprived of the right to have enough free time. For another thing, most kids are sent to art schools to learn things that they are not interested in. Consequently, they will be reluctant to cooperate with the teachers resulting in the waste of time and energy.